Here I present possibly the worst poem of all time..

and of course it’s mine 😉

I have decided to post this one up because I guess I’m just after a little feedback 🙂

Here goes:

I’m writing in forget

of you and everything you are:

the smile that could lead

one thousand men to rosy death

to drown in your beauty and only need

you to speak so kindly

like you spoke to me;

you’d say you had never met

a girl like me

never intended was he

to be so true, so tactfully

honest in solitary

where his mind will always be.

To tell him how you feel

would give him your heart

where his torturous presence’s

root will start,

It is from there where I now depart.

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